improving a paper 1

I wrote this paper at the beginning of the semester about answering three questions ( in my opinion ) what is Art ? What is creativity ? How Art Impacted my life ? the professor wants now to make improvement on the paper based on what we learned during the semester. we learned about drawing, painting, three of dimensional art using the elemental woods forms, and photography art. that is what you need to know to make the improvements on the paper. I attached the old paper that you going to make the changes on.