I hired another tutor to work on this report. The report was/is supposed to be a personal reflection. however the tutor put in way too much analysis of the book and made it a summary of the book.

Your Assignment is to go through the essay and remove most of the analysis unless you are making a personal opinion (I agree or I disagree) or any other emotion towards the writing. remember this paper is supposed to be a personal reflection of the book ISHMAEL and the paper should have alot of personal opinions