edit-my-original-essay-about-animal-testing

Plz edit my paper.(Plz help me to narrow down my topic make it more specific)(I wrote about animal testing, you can write about pharmacy)

The first and second attachment is perfect example from professor.

And third attached word is my own writing.

fourth attachment is professor’s opinion.

Plz put a lot resources and insert a lot detail(statistic and picture).

Plz add another 600 words. I will give a lot tips if you did well!!! thanks